出租女友3
《出租女友3》
募资中
陌陌杀红眼,支付宝㕛到账一万元! 儿子放弃挣扎,父亲忍痛掏钱

募资开始

2021.05.19

募资结束

2022.07.30

募资金额(元)

60000/100000

剧本内容
铁棍,铁棍的父亲和母亲,一如往常的正在吃饭。其乐融融。
母亲:“铁棍,怎么不叫你女朋友来吃饭啊,年过完咋就不见影子了。”(一定要带有怀疑和一些生气)
此时铁棍和父亲同时停下了筷子,身体一紧(这里要用一个镜头提现出两人的紧张,最好从儿子的后背找到挺住的碗筷,以及父亲僵住的表情)
铁棍支支吾吾:妈,陌陌他工作也忙呢。(目前铁棍的状态是不知道父亲已经识破并被套路了一万。)
母亲:“忙?再忙吃个饭的时间还是有的吧。”
铁棍一脸无奈,刚说又说不出来,父亲见状,急忙插话
父亲:“哎,年轻人的事情就让年轻人自己处理嘛。吃饭吃饭。”说着又顺手往母亲碗里夹菜。

此时,门外响起高跟鞋的声音,由远及近,(时间过的很慢,营造点紧张氛围)
钥匙插进门孔的声音,一家人看向门,接着是钥匙旋转声音。
门开了,竟然是陌陌

母亲哎呀了一声,非常高兴的上去迎接,留下背后又惊又尴尬又怒的两人。
“刚刚正念叨你呢,你就来了。”
“叔叔、阿姨,你们好。”父亲没有回头。虽然背对着,但是陌陌能感受到父亲的生气。
铁棍非常震惊,呆在了凳子上没有动。以他的脑子怎么会想到陌陌竟然主动杀上了门,还有了钥匙。
“嗐,你个背时娃儿,怎么瓜起也?”(四川话,或者其他方言)
回过神的铁棍装作很高兴的过来迎接
“陌陌,你,你,咋咋来啦,你这钥匙?。”铁棍知道,只要自己上去迎接,就代表今晚一万块又没了。
陌陌非常自然的上去拉着铁棍的手。
“钥匙是叔叔给我的啦,怎么啦,不欢迎我来啊,那我走啦。”
此时的父亲,后背一紧,转过头看了看,又迅速回过头。这钥匙是他当初在酒店干炮,临走时忘拿了,再回来找时,陌陌已经离开,他叫陌陌送回来,结果陌陌没回话,他以为就这样断了联系,也就想着继续配一把算了。
铁棍呆了1秒,母亲看铁棍傻了吧唧的,直接上去拉住陌陌:别别别,来都来了。然后立马转头对着铁棍骂道:嘿,你是啷个滴也?认不到了咩?(方言,带有斥责)。
铁棍依然看着母亲和陌陌,想说又说不出,欢迎吧,钱包遭不住,不欢迎吧,又害怕骗局被拆穿。
母亲看着铁棍一直没反应,去把门关上,然后就直接拉着陌陌往饭桌走。
“还没吃呢吧,我们也是刚吃。”镜头从饭桌摄到门口,照着铁棍的背影,照着父亲尴尬又焦虑的面孔。父子两人都背对着陌陌。
母亲安排陌陌坐下,看着父亲冷淡的脸:“你龟儿又是啷个?看到陌陌也不打招呼?”又迅速看向铁棍“你两个咋神戳戳的。”又看向陌陌“你坐噢,阿姨去给你拿碗筷”
趁着母亲离开的间隙
铁棍回来做到陌陌身边。陌陌搂着铁棍:我好想你啊。
铁棍没回答,并问父亲:爸,你啥时候把钥匙给陌陌的啊,也不跟我说一声。
父亲内心很复杂,没法说破,又不想继续,但眼下,还是装作淡定的说:“那个,上次陌陌走的时候嘛…我想着她都在家过夜了,就给把钥匙,以后常来嘛。”说完白了儿子一眼。
这时候母亲拿了碗筷,添好米饭摆在陌陌面前。
“谢谢阿姨”
“客气啥,来来来,吃饭吃饭。”
接下来的镜头是阿姨和陌陌微笑着谈话,父子俩尴尬的陪着笑(用慢镜头,配点滑稽的音乐)

最后吃完饭
“陌陌,今晚就不用回去啦。晚上还是在这里住吧。”
父子俩还是尴尬不说话。
“好的阿姨,你们都吃好了吧,我去洗碗啦。”
“这怎么好意思,还是我来吧。”
“没事儿,阿姨,我来吧。”
此时铁棍内心os:“我日你妈哟,真没把自己当外人啊”
父亲内心os:“这婆娘到底要搞啥?”


铁棍很快来到厨房,站在陌陌旁边,盯着门口,也盯着陌陌


“不是说了吗?你怎么又来了?”
“我这不是想你了吗?”
“你想个锤子你想,你是想老子的钱吧,我求求你了,过年7天,我真的被你榨干了,无论是身体还是钱包,你给我留点儿嘛。”
“铁棍儿啊,你这样说就有点无情了呀,我陪你,你不高兴吗?你看你们一家人和和气气的。多开心。”
铁棍还想开口说点什么,却不料母亲正笑眯眯的走进来。
“哎哟,陌陌是真勤快啊。”
“阿姨,哪有,这都是应该的,何况还有铁棍陪我呢。”转头看向铁棍“是吧,亲爱的”
铁棍挤出一个哭笑不得的表情。然后看向母亲:是,是的。

母亲有点指责的指着铁棍说:你是什么表情。随后又看向陌陌。那你俩忙着,我去陪你爸噢。


The iron rod, the father and mother of the iron rod, are eating as usual. It's fun.
Mother: "Iron Rod, why don't you ask your girlfriend to come for dinner? I won't see the shadow after the new year." (Be sure to be suspicious and a little angry)
At this time, the iron rod and the father stopped the chopsticks at the same time, and their bodies tightened (here we need to use a lens to show the tension of the two people, it is best to find the holding bowl and chopsticks from the back of the son, and the father's froze expression)
The iron rod falsified: Mom, Mo Mo is also busy at work. (The current state of the iron rod is that I don't know that my father has seen it through and has been 10,000 yuan.)
Mother: "Busy? There is still time for a meal, right?"
The iron rod looked helpless. He just said it but couldn't say it. When his father saw this, he hurriedly interjected.
Father: "Hey, let the young people take care of themselves. Eat and eat." He said and put vegetables into the mother's bowl.

At this time, the sound of high heels sounded outside the door, from far to near, (time passes very slowly, creating a bit of tension)
The sound of the key inserted into the door hole, the family looked towards the door, followed by the sound of the key rotating.
The door opened, it turned out to be Mo Mo

The mother yelled and went up to greet her very happily, leaving behind the two people who were surprised, embarrassed and angry.
"Just righteously talking about you, you came."
"Uncle and aunt, hello." Father didn't look back. Although his back was facing, Mo Mo could feel his father's anger.
The iron rod was shocked and stayed on the stool without moving. In his mind, how could he have thought that Mo Mo would take the initiative to kill the door, and he still had the key.
"Hey, when you are a baby, how can you pick it up?" (Sichuan dialect, or other dialects)
The recovered iron rod pretended to be very happy to come over to greet
"Momo, you, you, what's going on, your key?" Iron Rod knew that as long as he went up to greet him, it meant that 10,000 yuan was gone tonight.
Mo Mo came up naturally and took the hand of the iron rod.
"The key was given to me by my uncle. What's the matter, I'm not welcome to come, then I'm leaving."
At this time, the father tightened his back, turned his head and looked back, then quickly turned his head back. This key was the key he used to fire at the hotel. He forgot to take it when he left. When he came back to look for it, Mo Mo had already left. He asked Mo Mo to send it back. But Mo Mo didn’t reply. He thought he broke the contact like this, so he wanted to. Let's continue with one.
The iron rod stayed for 1 second, and my mother was silly looking at the iron rod, and went straight up to hold Momo: Don't stop, it's all here. Then immediately turned his head and cursed at the iron rod: Hey, are you crying? Don't recognize me? (Dialect, with rebuke).
The iron rod still looked at his mother and Mo Mo, wanting to say but could not say, welcome, the wallet can't stand it, unwelcome, and fear that the scam will be broken.
Mother looked at the iron rod without responding, went to close the door, and then directly took Momo to the dining table.
"I haven't eaten it yet, we just ate too." The camera was taken from the dining table to the door, illuminating the back of the iron rod, and the awkward and anxious face of his father. Both father and son turned their backs to Mo Mo.
The mother arranged for Mo Mo to sit down and looked at his father's cold face: "Are you crying again? You don't say hello when you see Mo Mo?" Then he looked at the iron rod quickly, "You two were pricked by God." Xiang Momo "Sit down, Auntie will get you the tableware"
Taking advantage of the gap between mother's departure
The iron rod came back to be beside Mo Mo. Mo Mo put his arms around the iron rod: I miss you so much.
The iron rod did not answer, and asked his father: Dad, when did you give Momo the key, and he didn't tell me a word.
My father's heart is very complicated, he can’t say anything, and doesn’t want to continue, but at the moment, he still pretends to say calmly: "Well, the last time Momo left...I thought she had stayed at home for the night, so I would give the key. Come here often." After speaking, he gave his son a glance.
At this time, the mother took the bowls and chopsticks, added some rice, and placed them in front of Mo Mo.
"Thank you auntie"
"You're welcome, come, come, eat and eat."
The next shot shows the aunt and Momo smiling and talking, and the father and son laugh awkwardly (use slow motion with some funny music)

Finally finished the meal
"Momo, you don't have to go back tonight. Let's stay here tonight."
The father and son still did not speak in embarrassment.
"Okay auntie, you are all ready to eat, I'm going to wash the dishes."
"How embarrassing it is, I'll do it."
"It's okay, Auntie, let me do it."
At this moment, the iron rod's heart os: "My god, you really didn't treat yourself as an outsider."
The father's heart os: "What the hell is this woman going to do?"


The iron rod quickly came to the kitchen, stood beside Mo Mo, staring at the door, and also at Mo Mo


"Didn't you say it? Why are you here again?"
"Didn't I miss you?"
"You want a hammer, you think, you want Lao Tzu's money, I beg you, for the 7th day of the Chinese New Year, I was really squeezed by you, whether it's my body or my wallet, you leave me some."
"Iron rod, you are a bit ruthless to say that, I am with you, are you unhappy? You see your family is kind. How happy."
The iron rod still wanted to say something, but his mother was walking in with a smile.
"Oh, Mo Mo is so diligent."
"Auntie, it's all right, let alone an iron rod to accompany me." Turning his head to look at the iron rod, "Yes, dear"
The iron rod squeezed out a dumbfounded expression. Then looked to the mother: yes, yes.
The mother pointed to the iron rod a little accusingly and said: What is your expression. Then he looked at Mo Mo. Then you two are busy, I'll go with your dad.

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